How to Write Job Descriptions That Attract Top Sales Talent: 

Written By Eric Palmer

A Complete Guide to Employer Branding

Job descriptions are often the first touchpoint between your company and potential sales superstars. Yet, according to LinkedIn's talent research, 72% of hiring managers admit their job descriptions could better reflect their employer brand. This represents both a challenge and an opportunity for sales leaders looking to build high-performing teams.

The Hidden Cost of Poor Employer Branding in Job Descriptions

Consider this: According to LinkedIn's Global Recruiting Trends report, companies with strong employer brands see a 43% decrease in cost per hire and attract 50% more qualified applicants. Your job description isn't just a list of requirements—it's a marketing document that can either magnetize or repel top sales talent.

Why Traditional Job Descriptions Fall Short


Most sales job descriptions follow an outdated template:

- Generic responsibilities copied from competitors

- Bland company descriptions that could apply anywhere

- Long lists of requirements that deter qualified candidates

- Little to no emphasis on company culture or growth opportunities


The result? High-potential candidates scroll past your posting while your recruitment timeline stretches on.

Strategic Framework: The 4 Pillars of Employer Branding in Job Descriptions

1. Value Proposition Clarity

Your Employer Value Proposition (EVP) should shine through every section of your job description. According to Gartner, organizations that effectively deliver on their EVP can decrease annual employee turnover by 69%.

Practical Implementation:

  • Lead with your company's mission and its impact on the industry

  • Highlight unique benefits and growth opportunities

  • Showcase real success stories from your sales team

  • Emphasize your sales enablement technology stack

Example:

  • Instead of: "Looking for experienced sales professionals."

  • Write: "Join a sales team that closed $50M in new business last year, powered by cutting-edge sales enablement tools and weekly 1:1 coaching with industry veterans."

2. Cultural Authenticity

According to Glassdoor, 77% of job seekers consider company culture before applying. Your job description should reflect your workplace environment, not an idealized version.

Key Elements to Include:

  • Real team dynamics and collaboration styles

  • Day-in-the-life scenarios

  • Professional development opportunities

  • Recognition and reward systems

3. Performance Transparency

Top sales professionals want clarity about expectations and opportunities. Be specific about:

  • Compensation structure (base, commission, bonuses)

  • Sales cycle and average deal size

  • Territory and account distribution

  • Quota attainment expectations

4. Technology and Tools

Modern sales professionals expect modern tools. Highlight your tech stack:

  • CRM system (Salesforce, HubSpot)

  • Sales enablement platforms (Outreach, SalesLoft)

  • Communication tools (Zoom, Slack)

  • Analytics and reporting capabilities


Practical Tools and Resources for Optimizing Job Descriptions

Free Tools:

1. Textio (Free trial available)

  • Analyzes job description language for bias

  • Suggests more inclusive alternatives

  • Provides engagement scoring

2. Gender Decoder

  • Identifies gender-coded language

  • Helps create more balanced descriptions

3. Hemingway Editor

  • Improves readability

  • Highlights complex sentences

  • Suggests clearer alternatives

Premium Solutions:

1. LinkedIn Talent Solutions

  • Job posting optimization

  • Candidate matching

  • Employer branding tools

2. Phenom People

  • AI-powered job description optimization

  • Career site personalization

  • Candidate relationship management

Integration with Common ATS/CRM Systems:

  • Greenhouse

  • Lever

  • Workday

  • iCIMS

Step-by-Step Implementation Guide

1. Audit Current Job Descriptions (Week 1)

  • Review engagement metrics

  • Analyze application rates

  • Collect feedback from recent hires

2. Develop New Templates (Week 2)

  • Create role-specific frameworks

  • Include success metrics

  • Add cultural elements

3. Test and Optimize (Weeks 3-4)

  • A/B test different versions

  • Track key metrics:

    • Application rate

    • Quality of applicants

    • Time to fill positions

    • Cost per hire

Industry Trends Shaping Employer Branding in 2024

1. Remote Work Evolution

  • 74% of sales organizations now offer hybrid working models

  • Emphasis on digital collaboration tools

  • Focus on virtual sales enablement

2. AI Integration

  • AI-powered sales tools are becoming the standard

  • Automated lead scoring and qualification

  • Enhanced customer insights capabilities

3. Career Development Focus

  • Increased emphasis on upskilling

  • Clear progression paths

  • Mentorship programs

Case Study: RevTech Solutions

RevTech Solutions transformed its sales recruitment by revamping its job descriptions with solid employer branding:

Before:

  • Generic job postings

  • 45-day average time-to-fill

  • 25% offer acceptance rate

After:

  • Branded, specific descriptions

  • 28-day average time-to-fill

  • 78% offer acceptance rate

Key changes included:

  • Specific performance metrics

  • Real team member testimonials

  • Clear progression paths

  • Detailed tech stack information


Best Practices Checklist

✓ Clear value proposition

✓ Specific performance metrics

✓ Growth opportunities

✓ Technology stack details

✓ Cultural elements

✓ Success stories

✓ Inclusive language

✓ Mobile optimization


Action Items for Implementation

1. Review current job descriptions against this framework

2. Implement A/B testing with new formats

3. Track key metrics for optimization

4. Gather feedback from recent hires

5. Update descriptions quarterly


Get Expert Help

Ready to transform your sales job descriptions and attract top talent? MySalesRecruiter.co offers personalized consulting to optimize your employer branding strategy. Contact our team for a free assessment of your current job descriptions.


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Article by Eric Palmer - Chief Recruiter at MySalesRecruiter.co

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